It was you

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It was you who taught me who i really am,
you taught me what is real and made me see clearly,
now I’m breathing in the real world for the first time,
the only thing you never taught me was how horrible and cruel it could be,
and that i would have to do it without you.
I’ve become what I am because of you, it was all you,
All i wonder now is why i was so oblivious all along.

This poem was written/submitted by Elle Amelia .

3 Comments on “It was you”

• arieL wrote on 23 October, 2010, 22:19

  I love your poem; I don’t know if it was something you wrote because you went through it or not but I know how it feels; I am sorry for your loss; i too have Lost someone who I dearly felt the same way about! but thank you for sharing this wonderful poem!
• lisa babb wrote on 6 March, 2011, 4:22

  That’s a beautiful poem, you should write more.
• shalendra wrote on 13 May, 2011, 12:34

  u should write more poems this is also very good poem ………..heart touching lines we both have suffered from the same thing ……….i think so write some more

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