Bleeding Heart
This bleeding heart has bled to death.
Once full of life, now nothing is left.
This bleeding heart once burned with desire.
Disappointment and pain extinguished the fire.
This bleeding heart had so many dreams,
Dreams that were so real or at least they seemed.
Dreams of you had me aglow.
Some dreams of you, yes, they hurt me so.
Dreams of you made me turn quite roughly,
Until I woke up, and smelled the coffee.
One night, one dream made me realize,
My heart and soul you shall never victimize.
As I look you in the eyes with a vengeful frown,
Recalling the dream that taught me never to let my guard down.
This bleeding heart can bleed no more,
You see, for you have locked its door and thrown away the key.
By:
-Lauren
March 5th, 2008 at 4:44 pm
Wow thats deep, real deep kind of what i’m feeling now but my boyfriends still with me.
May 13th, 2008 at 12:35 am
it IS real deep, & i feel jus like that, my bf broke up w/ bout a month ago, but im still not anywhere near over him…
May 25th, 2008 at 6:16 pm
this is real so real i can feel the pain as much as the writer did….but sometimes you feel that you are the only one in pain….and no one cares if you are in pain….move on people…live for tomorow and learn from yesterday…walk away from anything that cause pain because you deserve a better life.
June 19th, 2008 at 2:09 pm
i think that this i what i should give to someone that hurt me and ithink that you can feel the pain just by reading it
, i think that it means a lot and i think that you put alot of thought into it and you wrote it becasue it probaly happened to you once ,
June 27th, 2008 at 8:41 am
Hey a really like that poem what made you write it i fell every thing about your poem right now do
you know what kind a poem’s i could write this is how i fell sad pushed a side not wanted wanting to suicided myself i do write poems but i have wrote about 40 and i would like more opinions about one i could do so if any one could help well what age are you i am 15 maybe if any one knows any thing i could do and put in to it.
Well better go i am in class but hoping we can talk so.
Ashleigh x